Response 2 to Kyley Elizabeth free write Week 1

I think this scrap of a poem is a good start. I think this poem is from a scene where a lover has been abandoned with nothing left but old gifts and letters from their ex. Uh. At first I didn't know what was going on but you were just setting the scene and with "smokey air" I got a view of like a cabin on a mountain side away from the city. When it gets to the seventh line the lines get longer and I understood the emotions the person was feeling. Ant the short, brief lines in the beginning made me feel isolated.