Response 1 to "The Nightingale Wished for Egg rolls" Week 1

I like how this is told through the eyes of a bird. I got a good picture in my mind of New York City and you describe it in a way that you can only understand if you put yourself in a bird's shoes. My favorite line is the first line with the rhyming and the alliteration. It caught my attention and really put me in to the bird's shoes. I also liked how the bird seemed to be stumbling across all of these sights and sounds but at the same time it was used to seeing a bunch of different things at once.