Classmate response 1 Week 4

wow this draft just spews hate from every direction and it's awesome. Every word throws a low blow; none of the words are a waste of space. Even the long, scientific words add a lengthy disgust that cannot be summed up with a short Germanic word. The draft also does a good job of moving, like I can actually feel like a disease is spreading. Once you get halfway through you can't stop reading the insults and the hate just takes over. I can't wait to see what a title for this would be.