Response to Kyley Elizabeth The Fog
I think with words like candy coated, caught and encapsulated tomb you get a good sense of being trapped in a confining space. After reading the last line of your poem it reminded me of another poem called The Sacred by Stephen Dunn. I just felt like this poem was a reply to The Fog because they both are focused on spaces and how the space makes the speaker feel, but instead of feeling depressed they feel empowered. I think if you did a riff off of The Sacred it could make your poem longer and more positive at the end.
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