Classmate response2 Week 3

There are so many amazing sounds in this poem, there's alliteration everywhere. This is the kind of poem that you read aloud and the sounds alone give the most to the reader. You do a good job of showing the images. "Butterfly that will soon be chasing stars" is amazing because it's not a predictable way of showing how butterflies fly and I never seem them flying at night so it was cool to picture a butterfly flying at night. The verbs are great because you didn't use any one verb twice.