Response1 Week 8

This kinda looks like an improv from "Clear Night". You start off with just descriptions and then you get to the heavy stuff that means alot to the speaker since it is repeated. I also like how in the beginning the speaker is observing random things to keep the mood light until the end. You did a good job of picking the right phrase "When I come Home" it is something that people can relate to and have experience but it does not sound cliche.