Response to Daddy Love his Daughter by Aveguel
Well this story does seem like something that came from a law and order svu episode. It is a heavy topic but you did a good job of not staying directly on the topic. Bringing up the European traditions and deflowering was a good distraction and it lead you right back to the present situation with all of its irony of having "him" walk the speaker down the isle wearing the garter that "garters ink around my thigh". YOu made the garter one of those concrete objects that stand for something way abstract to the speaker. I enjoyed it alot it was very clever.
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